correcting myself... (old posts)

A GREAT PAINTING!!

The first time that I saw this Picture I got scared. Actually, it has threatened me until now!! However, every time that I find this picture in anywhere, I can stop and look at it a long time (SM). This is a very good painting that represents the anguish of somebody that is lost or has lost something valued for him/her. When you see this painting you are not strange to it, you can feel exactly the same as the character. (SM)That is the main purpose of all the paintings. (P) And that is what the painter expects of you, through the colours and details.

I HATE MATHS!!

I don’t know why I always have hate maths (WO). Actually, this subject is like my trauma (SM) (WO) (WT). I try to put much effort to accomplish all my tasks in it. However, when I am in front of a test, something happened to my (WT), that I did all the exercises bad. Actually, before take the test I tried to study with some of my classmates (WT). But my performances in it were deplorable. But, this problem was not only at the school. When I entered at the university, I had to take maths (again!!) I was so nervous because I have never been good at maths (P) so I had a prediction on my mind. Thankfully, I could pass the subject without too many problems.

answering hector's letter

Dear hector, I have not answered you because I did not come to classes last wed. However, today I caught myself up with my duties.

First of all, the symbols mean the following:

Ww: wrong word

We: wrong expression

Wt: wrong tense

Sp:Spelling

C: Capital letters

P: punctuation

wo: word order

Wf: wrong form

Nn: not needed

?: not clear

Sm: something missing

Now, I hope you can understand my correction.

Telling you about me, I can say that I like English so much. Want to be an English teacher, because I believe that I can make a little change in the way how it has been teaching. I want to work in the south of Chile. I know the weather is awful but I really like the one that they have. About my hobbies, I like to practice sports. Actually, now I practice: spinning, aero box and aero-step, I practiced tae kwon do but I had to left it because of the time. I love to dance and listen to English music.

Sorry I have classes of literature, so I have to go now!

Take care!!!

Regards

Pauly

PD: I am the one with glasses!!

Ricardo's correction

Oh! I think I have got a lot of favourite piece(SM) of technology, (P) few years ago when I was (SM) adolescent I was always playing with my Nintento (SP), I loved it, one time I was waiting for Christmas and when this night arrived (WE) my parents had a great gift for me, they gave me my first Nintendo, then the supernintendo came to the market. I don’t know why but when I’m thinking about Nintendo a lot of good regards spring (WE) to my mind. In the final(WE) of the nineties was release for sale the Nintendo64, I remembered that one time I was playing (WF) two days on-the-run. The N64 was incredible and it had an amazing graphics level.Years later I realized that to buy video consoles it was a stupid thing because it’s much better to buy a good personal computer, then the PC became my favourite piece of technology, I could do everything I wanted, Internet, to watch movies, to play video games and so on. Now I use my PC for college work, but when I have free time I can share information with friends or I can watch a good film with my girlfriend. That’s all for me. Well, I tried not to make mistakes…. Guud vay!!!

Hector's correction

In my point of view (P) the best field trip was in Alto del Carmen, III region. That field trip was in last(X) years(X) 2007. That field trip was duration of (WE) one week. The subject was Geología de Campo I, in (P) (SM)Facultad de Ciencias Físicas y Matemáticas(P) and that subject (course) is included (WW) with complementary formation. I remember saw to (WW) lot of fosil(SM) (SM) the Jurasic age with waylay (?). The wayla is (SM)kind of mollusc. Also (SM) saw a lot of (SM) kind the (WW) rock with limestone, andesite, wacka and minerals (SM) as quartz, feldespt, and fragment litic. I remember what all night we have had drink the alcohol(?). The ultimate (WW) day (SM -2words-))back to Santiago, We played futbol and I (x) with some (SM) classmate(SM) had (X) swimming (WT) in the pool of camping. That day in(X) the(X) (SM) night the teacher (Brian Townley) had (SM) barbecued for all (SM) people. Also I remember had other course (Geologia Campo II). That field trip I celebrated my birthday (July 30)(?). On the other hand I remember have had (X) worked a lot of(X) in that day. We got up many (X) early (SM), more (SM) less to 7 o’clock. That day was hard, all our walked various hours for a lot of hill looking rock and stratum formation. The back in Santiago we have had make to geology map the Alto del Carmen (?)

"KES"

Billy buried kes but his mind was knitting the worst vendetta that Jud would ever imagine. Three weeks waited Billy patiently, when one night his opportunity came with Jud drunk and his mother in a short trip with one of her lovers. That night Billy, as always, helped Jud taking off the clothes. When he was ready inside the bed, Billy decided took all the money that Jud has gain in one of his latest robbers (his new way to obtain money).

Billy walked five days to south direction. He arrived to a new and interesting city in which he decided to live without his mother and brother. He was so good at this city that he never needed them again in his life. He grew and got mature alone and found the road of his life so far, of what he family used to be.

Let's play with words!!

Task 1:

The first time that I saw this Picture (P) I got scared. Actually, it has (SM) threatened (WT) me until now!! However, every time that I find this picture in anywhere, I can stop and look at it a long time. (SM) This is a very good painting that represents the anguish of somebody that is lost or has lost something valued for him/her. (SM) When you see this painting you are not strange to it, you can feel exactly the same as the character. That is the main purpose of all the paintings. And that is what the painter expects of you, through the colours and details.

Task 2:

I think that work with the students of the Universidad the Chile has been a very good way to learn from others. Moreover, it is useful for us because this is the same way that we will have to deal with students from the schools. I really enjoy this way because I pay much attention and care to check student’s blogs. By the time that I understood that they really depend in some way of my “job” I put much effort in the correction that I do every Wednesday for them. I think that the connection, which we have with the student from Universidad de Chile by blogs, is beneficial for both sides. They have somebody that helps them to improve their writing and English. And we start to practice as teachers.

Hector's blog !!

In the future I think is (X) (SM) working in Universidad de Chile( Facultad de Ciencias Sociales -Escuela de Antropología) in together (WE) with IPHES (Insitituto Catalan de Paleoecologia Humana y Evolucion Social), because I loved archaeology (P) moreover (P) soonly (SP) I will have interview with (SM) archaeology__ (SM) with (X) Donald Jackson for (WW) working (WF) and make the professional practice (SM). The IPHES is a network world (WO) (SM) the evolution and archaeology the first human settlement. They have a post degree about Quaternary Archaeology and Human Evolution. This post degree (SM) make in Spain (?). In this time I will hope to have that post degree (?). I will live in Santiago, but before I lived in Spain while I had post degree. When gradued I will travel for (WW) (SM) Chile making investigation in these item (WW). My idea in the future is studied (WF) archaeology and I will be the best archaeology in Chile. Maybe I (SM) have girlfiend, but I do not married, because I will (X) think (SM) wedding (X) after 30 years old. Maybe my the worst problem is plannig a lot of the future, but I think that is how it should be (?).